That really caught my eye.

love the colour, looks like jewels

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cool

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realy nice

Overall I like it alot, but some of the DOF, perspective, color, and tonality in the shift toward the bottom third of the image seems a bit strange/awkward to me.

Awesome, I love the little build ups of energy.

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Thats dope

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Awesome render...hey can you publish a tutorial for doing similar artwork

You said a little critique so I won't give you TOO much.

The render is the same which I said was great before so no need to cover that.
The Biomecha typo, maybe bring each one in closer to the right side, or bring in the C4D, and PS ones in to the same distance since they aren't they aren't the main part like the Alpha Dezines one is.
The little octagon and square things are done well and you didn't overuse them.
The bg looks good with the big render there, but it attracts a tad too much attention away from the main point.
That weird white outline thing looks good in some parts and as if it's too much in other parts. I'll let you try to determine which since you said a little critique.
The bottom looks on the plain side.
The focal point is too large imo.

Overall good work though.

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